Lil Stinker don't give a flip!!!

Any constructive advice on how I can improve my future drawings would be greatly appreciated.

Original- 9-22-12 manaista.deviantart.com/art/Li…

Well I’m not too happy with how this came out. I’m still screwing up on my anatomy. Bit by bit, I am slowly learning to hate my stuff a little less. So he is basically a recurring secondary character. He is not really there to move any story along. He just does what giant monster skunks do best. I feel like story and character development weigh me down sometimes, so I just kept the personality and origin simple. He started out just as a random crazy idea, but then I just had an itch to keep drawing him. There is a lot more to come including a fight with my little electric porcupine. manaista.deviantart.com/art/Po…

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LIL STINKER

Species- mutated skunk

Standing height: 61.3m (201ft)

Weight: 29541 metric tons

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Powers-
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Death spray- Of course like a skunk he has spray abilities. However, his spray is much worse than smelling bad for a few days. There was a case where he sprayed in the middle of a large city and rendered a 20mi (32km) area uninhabitable to nearly anything but him for about five weeks.

killer stench- The smell alone is actually strong enough to kill any weaker creatures (including humans) within about a 5mi (8km) radius. If it doesn't kill, it will definitely make anything sick as long as they can smell it. Even some tougher monster become violently ill from the stench. The smell can last for weeks too.

highly corrosive- As if the smell wasn't bad enough, direct contact will cause severe acid burns on any surface it touches. The spray has the consistency of a sticky jell, so it is extremely hard to get off. In mist form, it can be especially deadly.

flammable- The spray is combustible in open flames, this can be a good or bad thing for Lil Stinker.


Four spray nozzles- He has two nozzles located near the base of his tail like a normal skunk, but he also has a nozzle in each wrist to spray forward. His rear cannons are the more powerful ones.

Spray, mist, or saturate- He can spray up to 20 times his own body length. He also can produce a highly toxic stink cloud for protection or to cover a larger area. He has even learned that if needed, he can cover his claws in his own foul liquid to dramatically increase the damage to his prey.

Strong immune system- His immune system has a high resistance to most poisons and tranquilizers. “LIL STINKER DON’T GIVE A FLIP!”

nasty claws and teeth- His claws and teeth prove surprisingly effective at tearing through flesh, it is even worse because he has learned to coat his claws in his acidic spray.

Big fluff ball- His thick fur can provide some decent protection from attacks. His large fluffy tail can even act as a shield.


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weaknesses-
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Unpleasant backfire (literally)- There is a major problem with having a highly flammable liquid coming out of your backside. Wreakless use of his spray near open flames could actually cause a very painful backfire into one of his nozzles.

Not very bright- He lacks strategy and any real fighting style. It is also not very hard to trick him. Sometimes he picks fights with fights that could easily kick his smelly butt.

Smell him coming- After he sprays, his strong scent make it very easy to tell that he is nearby. This means he can't use his spray if he wants to ambush his prey.

Limited amount- He can only spray so much, and it takes several days for him to regenerate more spray.

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Personality-
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"LIL STINKER DON'T GIVE A FLIP!"

Bully- He has learned that even some of the some of the toughest monsters will avoid him and the threat of getting sprayed. He will intimidate other monsters, steal their food, and take their home with just a raise of his tail. He will sometimes spray in an area (or right at them if he is in a bad mood) just as a reminder who is boss.

Attitude of humans- He sees them as a food source. He only attacks humans when he is hungry or provoked. Other than that, he really doesn’t care. He sometimes wanders into cities in search of food which usually will end in an attack and a very bad smelling city.

Attitude of other monsters- Lil Stinker is known to be pretty aggressive to other monsters. He usually only attacks monsters smaller than him for food and shelter, but he will go after bigger tougher monsters if he is desperate. On the rare occasions there is plenty of food and space, he can be a somewhat docile creature to live with.

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Origin-
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Not much is known about his background beyond the theory that he received a very high dose of a strange alien microbe from a series of meteors that struck the planet and mutated many creatures.

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diet-
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Just about anything he can fit in his mouth.
"LIL STINKER DON'T GIVE A FLIP!"